Waiting
This longing palpable
no matter where or with whom.
All these years
something missing.
Sometimes heard
in the pining
of the solitary bird
at the rim of the bluff,
unseen but sensed
in wind moving
like a hidden thing
brushing the sashes of the trees.
Calmed by the patience
of surrounding hills and mountains,
did others feel it?
Were they waiting too,
like the little songbird I sought
and followed
that flew just out of view
but at a pause
resting, came
and sat in the stillness near the tree
at the edge of the lake
in the shadow of the mountain
watching the water with me.
1. Choose one of these words, or another, and write for five minutes: LONELINESS, LONGING, CALM, PATIENCE, RESTING, WAITING, PINING, FEAR, JUBILATION, IRRITATION, SERENITY.
2. Describe a scene in nature or in a town, a place that captures a feeling, a space that is itself a metaphor for a feeling you want to convey. Use as many of your senses as you can.
3. Tell of an intense time when you chose or were forced to rest with an emotion, whether grief, anger, anticipation, hope, isolation, joy, or what have you. After a while, what did you do with the feeling? Did it escalate or dissipate as you sat with it? What was the benefit or fallout of simply resting with the emotion?
4. Respond for five minutes to one or more of the images in this post. "What's the story?"
4. Respond for five minutes to one or more of the images in this post. "What's the story?"
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Diane
Lovely!
ReplyDeleteThank you, dear Maureen! I must take a look at your blog too!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed this poem. Yes, I have felt a yearning and longing similar to this myself. Have written about it as well. I like how the bird keeps you company here. A good representation of the soul.
ReplyDeleteDear Krista,
ReplyDeleteI hope you'll add a link to your writings on this topic. I know I and others will want to read them. When we share on these themes, we expand the world with and for each other, even (especially) when it comes to solitary experiences, which can be so isolating. Gratefully,
Diane
Very beautiful poem! It works so well as a nature poem, and also metaphorically.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Rosemary. That means a lot. I included a writing prompt, #2 above, for readers who wish to take a try at this sort of writing.
ReplyDeleteI watched a documentary on bird watching yesterday. I immediately thought to myself that I MUST get some binoculars and a book on birds where I live. I never thought about birds much before I got my little lovebird Iki (EeeKee, "little" in Hawaiian) 12 years ago. He has such a HUGE personality. When I see birds outside now, I recognize little playful antics they do, just like my little Iki. I loved your poem as it showed you dear spirit and also because it caused me to think about little birds. Thank you!
ReplyDeleteKathy, it's so wonderful that Iki has got you noticing the playful antics of birds in the wild. It's no wonder that he shares so much of his personality with you, knowing how sensitive and aware you are. Animals have so much to show and, yes, to tell us if we attend to them. They are communicating all the time, if we pay attention. I've had horses, goats, sheep, elephants, mice, wild and tame birds, including an emu, macaques, cows, pigs, cats, and numerous dogs communicating with me once they knew I was "listening." I wonder how many stories folks have to tell about this. When we look at the wider or deeper message or inspiration beyond these encounters, well, moments can be so rich, can't they?
ReplyDeleteYour poem is beautiful, Diane. It's as though I can hear leaves on trees rustling and a gentle breeze blowing. Must visit you more often, these are wonderful writing prompts, too. Sharing! :-)
ReplyDeleteOh, Ezzy, as a writer you understand how much that feedback means. I'm glad I could share the experience with you and that you were able to take it in. Am also deeply pleased that you would share the writing prompts. Will look forward to visiting at your blog again too. Gratefully,
ReplyDeleteDiane
These are great prompts and I really enjoyed your poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Marie. And I very much appreciate the reviews at your blog and your tweets when I catch them.
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